Specificity Illustrated

Find here several outstanding handmade responses from students in my advanced English grammar class who have just read a couple of chapters on writing with clarity in June Casagrande’s It was the best of sentences, it was the worst of sentences.

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The purpose of the handmade response assignment is to promote reading engagement so that students will be prepared for class discussion of the assigned reading for the day.

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For more on how I use handmade thinking in my classes and the 21 visual formats for handmade response, see this video or this link.

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(By the way, while I enjoy the simplicity and direct discussion of grammar and style in Casagrande’s book, it could–like most books I read–use some effective illustrations to further engage and assist readers. )

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Click on images for larger view of these great drawings.

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