Category Archives: Visual Thinking

My New Drawing Table

I have for some time been wanting a drawing table in my office here at school.  However, my office is already pretty crowded with furniture: my desk, a conference table, bookshelves, and a storage cabinet. I was even thinking about getting a portable drawing stand could put on top of my conference table.

Then last week, in preparation for classes, I was cleaning out a closet in one of our classrooms, and found this old abandoned dictionary table.

Book Table Before

“That,” I said to myself, “has some potential.”  So I took it home, glued and hammered some new trim on the front, and painted it black to coordinate with my other furniture.  I now have a little drawing table that I can roll anywhere, and it’s just the right size for drawing my Tex cartoons.

Drawing Table After

Huzzah!

A Comic Article Submission

Back in June I mentioned I was drafting an article in comic format for a journal.

And the 10 page draft looked like this:

First Draft of Comic for JAEPL #20And after struggling with the drawing of the comic for awhile, I decided it made more sense to contact my daughter Myra, an artist/illustrator living in Brooklyn, to see if she would like to be my co-author and translate my ideas into comic format.   Well, this last weekend, we finished a 12 page comic (show below) titled “Drawing is Learning: To Understand and To Be Understood,” and I sent it in to the editors of JAEPL this morning.

Drawing is Learning on TableAnd here below are a couple of pages in more detail: page 2 and the notes/resources page for which I decided to use notes rather numbers for the notes.

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Now we wait!

Final Comic Expo in Reading Graphic Novels

About two weeks ago, I described my summer Reading Graphic Novels course and my students’ remarkable midterm comics.

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Today, they submitted their final comics to share with the class.  And WOW!

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We also had donuts.

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For this assignment, I asked my students to compose a comic of at least 2 pages and 12 panels and 3 colors that communicates a thematically or emotionally unified personal narrative.

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There were also to include annotations on the comic vocabulary they used while drawing their comics.

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The annotations would appear on a separate page, typed or handwritten, that detail the comic vocabulary used in panels selected for annotation.

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They were to refer to the comic vocabulary used by panel number and page number.  For example, the comic vocabulary of a motion lines used in panel 1 on page 1 would be signified as follows:  P1P1: motion lines.

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They were required to include at least 10 annotations from the following list, and none could be repeated. 

  • Bordered panel
  • Panel border
  • Panel with no border
  • Gutter
  • Motion lines
  • Emanata
  • Inset panel
  • Panel within panel
  • Narrative box
  • Speech bubble
  • Thought balloon
  • Close up
  • Medium shot
  • Long shot
  • Polyptych
  • Image echo
  • Transition – moment to moment *
  • Transition—action to action *
  • Transition—subject to subject *
  • Transition—scene to scene *
  • Transition—aspect to aspect *
  • Transition—non sequitor *

* Each transition annotation should explain how the transition works between the panels.

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Here below is a slideshow of photos of today’s class along with closer views of the amazing comics they created.  Choose fullscreen and pause for closer inspection of comics.  You can also access the slideshow here.


When I Was 6 X 6

Monday, June 30, 2014

This morning in my “Reading Graphic Novels” class, I asked students to draw a picture of themselves when they were 6 years old and then to develop a 6 panel comic based upon an experience they had during that time in their lives.

Because they have a Final Comic Assignment due in two days, I thought I’d give them a chance to draft something this morning that they might develop further into a 12 panel comic for this week.

First, I showed them an example or two of Lynda Barry’s “Marlys” comics to give them an idea of what might be possible.

Then I asked them to draw a portrait of how they looked at 6.  I also asked them to think about what clothes they might be wearing, what games or toys they played with, and the relationships they had with siblings and friends.

Next, I asked them to draw a narrative box in which they wrote, “I am [their name], and I am [some activity].”

After letting them draw and write for about 10 minutes, I then passed out blank 4 X 6 inch note cards and asked them to draw a 6 panel comic based upon their portrait and brief narrative.  After 15 minutes, I asked them to share their comics with each other, and then asked if anyone would like to share theirs with the class on the document camera.  About 8 students volunteered.

Here’s the one I sketched quickly;

My Job My Job_001 My Job_002 My Job_003 My Job_004 My Job_005I’m happy with what my students were able to sketch out for comics in the limited time I gave them.  Now I see that this is an exercise I could use in any class to prompt personal narrative writing.  I will definitely use this exercise in my creative writing class in the second summer session starting next Wednesday.  I’m also happy with what I learned about myself at the end of my comic.

Drawing is Learning

Monday, June 23, 2014.  San Angelo, Texas.

Today in class, I led my students through an exercise in which I asked them to remember one of their earliest memories, to write about that memory, and then to draw a 6 panel comic that captured the emotional content of that memory.

Memorial Day

This summer I am teaching an upper division special topics English course at Angelo State University titled “Reading Graphic Novels.”  For the course, students are reading Scott McCloud’s Understanding Comics, Alan Moore and David Gibbon’s Watchmen, Joe Sacco’s Palestine, and Chris Ware’s Jimmy Corrigan: The Smartest Kid on Earth.  (The syllabus for this course is here.)

In the Comics

In response to the daily reading assignments, students submit responses in the form of drawings.  These drawings use the “handmade thinking” technique I’ve developed wherein students choose among 21 visual formats that will serve as the basis for their drawings.  These visual formats or templates include common icons or images, such as a portrait, a web, a before and after sequence, a venn diagram, scales, layers, and a map.  (More on handmade thinking here.)

Drawing

Students also have two major assignments in which they are to draw comics.  At midterm, I asked them to draw a comic of at least 2 pages, 12 panels, and 3 colors about an influential cartoonist or graphic novelist.  (A slideshow of their midterm comics is here.)  For their final, they will draw a comic with the same formal requirements, but this comic will be a personal narrative that has a emotionally or thematically unified content.  A slice of life or snapshot of some experience they’ve had.

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The purpose of today’s activity was to provide them practice in accessing memorable experiences and converting those memories into a comic of 6 panels.  Because students have been studying comics and its visual vocabulary, as well as drawing two handmade responses each day, they have become quite comfortable and adept at drawing.  They know by now that visual analysis and composition is a mode of language learning and expression that is rarely taught in school when compared to textual literacy.

Literacy Shift

But they are now, after three short weeks of practice and very basic drawing instruction, pretty proficient at using images through their own drawings to capture their responses to the comics and graphic novels we are reading.  And their midterm comics were exceptional in their representation of the lives of influential comic artists and graphic novelists.

But in today’s exercise, I wanted them to sketch a comic out of their own experience, rather than in response to another text or subject.  And just as importantly, I wanted them to visualize and represent the emotional content of that experience.

Do It Yourself

So I asked them to close their eyes and consider that the memories they hold in their visual warehouse of memories were only stored there because they had emotional significance.  And I wanted them to go back into the farthest reaches of this warehouse, to the very back wall of the warehouse, to the place where they put their earliest memories, and to bring one of those into the light so they could see it better.

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I then asked them to write about this memory for awhile.  And when it looked like most had captured that memory in words, I asked them to translate that memory into 6 panels of a comic.  I told them not to worry about having to include narrative boxes or dialogue but to focus on the emotional content of the images that might best depict this memory for others.

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After they had shared these comics with each other, I then asked them to add an additional panel to the beginning of their comic and to add another panel at the end of their comic.  For the new first panel, I asked them to draw an establishing shot that might help their reader get a sense of where the action of their comic was taking place.  It could be a drawing of a house or a neighborhood or a larger perspective of a room.  For the final panel, I asked them to draw a close-up of an object that was already in one of their panels, an image that might assist in expressing the emotion of the memory.  After completing these additional panels, I asked students to share their comics again and talk about the changes they made and how these added panels contributed to the emotional content of the comics.

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All I was trying to do in class today was help them prepare for their final comic assignment by giving them a chance to practice retrieving their memories, drafting a comic, and focusing on the visual representation of emotional content.  This exercise is similar to those we often use in a creative or first-year writing class to help students write out of their own experiences.

Poetry Workshop

But my teaching experience tells me that using visual language to communicate those emotions has a different kind of power for the artist and reader than words might.  As an engagement strategy, as a tool for learning and communicating, drawing has served my students well.  And it’s a damn shame we don’t promote visual language learning and performance in schools for all students.  My faith in the word has become stronger in school, but I have had to gain faith in the image on my own, like most artists do.  I’d like to see a drawing-across-the-curriculum agenda adopted by schools and colleges everywhere.  Drawing is thinking and learning and understanding and communicating, too.  Why limit the languages available to us?  Let us expand our perspectives on learning.

 

A Comic Draft for JAEPL

First Draft of Comic for JAEPL #20

The editors over at JAEPL are planning a special issue for their 20th annual issue, and they invited me among others to submit an article that “either updates or takes a retrospective look at the research you’ve done and the effect you believe it had not only upon your own scholarship and teaching, but on that of others.”

They asked for something between 4000-5000 words.  Given that I’m now teaching a graphic novels class that also asks my students to try their hand at drawing comics, I asked them if they’d take a comic from me that surveys the work I’ve been doing in visual thinking.

Here above is a photo of a 10 page rough draft of a comic I quickly sketched out today.  It’s tentatively titled “To Understand and To Be Understood: Drawing as Learning.”

Gosh, that was fun.

I’m wondering now if there are academic journals out there yet that only accept work in comic format.

What about it, Nick Sousanis?

 

Visual Agenda 1st Day

first day visual agenda 6-2- 14Here is the visual agenda for the first day of class next week in my summer Reading Graphic Novels class.  Given the course topic, I’m trying to draw as many examples of sequential art as possible in my teaching of this course and the lesson plan or agenda for the class is a good way for me to show that.

  • Panel 1 = introductions
  • Panel 2 = review the syllabus
  • Panel 3 = ask questions about the syllabus
  • Panel 4 = diagnostic on what students already know about graphic novels and comics
  • Panel 5 = lecture and workshop on visual thinking
  • Panel 6 = homework for next class

More on this class here.

More on my use of visual agendas here.

 

A Comic Syllabus Complete

In my previous post, I explained I would be creating a syllabus in comic format for my graphic novels course this summer, primarily inspired by Austin Kleon’s mention of Lynda Barry’s forthcoming Syllabus and because I would be having them draw comics as well.

Yesterday, I completed the project, and here is a photo of all of the elements I used in the process of creating this syllabus spread out on the table in my office.

Table of Show Your Work Comics Syllabus

At top are the four books we’ll be reading in the course: Watchmen, Understanding Comics, Jimmy Corrigan: Smartest Kid on Earth, and Palestine.  Top left is a draft of the syllabus in text format, and at top on the right is the extra large Moleskine notebook I used for drawing the comic pages.  On top of the notebook is the comic page template for laying out the different pages, and these pages are spread out there below the four books.  After drawing each page with my trusty Pilot G-2 07, I scanned the page into Photoshop, cleaned things up a bit, and used the paint bucket tool for simple coloring.  In the center of the photo is the 12 page 5.5 X 8.5 inch comic syllabus booklet I will give to my students June 2.

Here are the pages in color, starting with the cover.

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I wanted to create a version of myself as narrator to include in the comic, so I chose something simple, given my rudimentary drawing skills.  This idea of the continual presence of a narrator primarily comes from Scott McCloud’s presentation of himself in Understanding Comics, but also from Lynda Barry’s work in One Hundred Demons and What It is.

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OK.  Speech balloons or narrative boxes?  I couldn’t really decide.  So a mix along the way.

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Part of the challenge of drawing this comic was adhering to university and State of Texas guidelines about what course syllabi must include, such as outcomes and assessments above.

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Another challenge was to include visual information without over-explaining or being too dependent upon text, such as the bottom image above which describes the process of incorporating hand drawn responses in the life of the classroom.

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In the image above, I wanted to give students a quick sense of the arc of this short summer session of about 5 weeks and where the major reading assignments and projects would fall.

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And here is the second page of the inside spread.  It’s another requirement of course syllabi that each day’s topic or assignment be designated, so I tried to create a coding system and schedule that would augment or expand upon the previous page.

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This above is my favorite page.

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I use contract grading in all of my classes now.  A fuller visual explanation of the minimum requirements for handmade responses and comics will take place in class.

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And above is a little more business again required of all syllabi, but still useful information.

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And finally, the back cover showing the 21 formats for handmade thinking that students can easily refer to.  They will be drawing two handmade responses for each class based on these simple visual templates.  More on handmade thinking here.

So there you have it, a pretty simple little comic that will serve as the visual syllabus for the class, but also demonstrate, I hope, how simple my students’ comics can be for the course, a course–by the way–for English majors and minors, and other students interested in visual storytelling.

A Comic Syllabus

I have for some time wanted to provide my students with an illustrated version of my course syllabus.  So after being inspired by seeing this, and after deciding I would give students in my summer graphic novels course midterm and final assignments in which they would draw comics, I decided it was time for me to give the comic syllabus a go.Comic Syllabus Step One 5 6 14

So pictured above is the original syllabus accompanied by the first draft layout of the comic syllabus.   And here below is a detail image of my comic self in the first four panels.

Comic Self for Syllabus

Now, on to the text!

 

 

The Older I Get

Earlier this week, on Monday, I had the opportunity to return to my alma mater Southwestern University in Georgetown, Texas, to present a talk and workshop on visual thinking as a strategy for engaging students more effectively in reading assignments and other course work.  I’ve already written a bit about this opportunity here.

In addition to the presentation and workshop, I wanted to do a bit of time travel back to my days at Southwestern between 1972 and 1976, so I walked around campus and drove to where I used to live in town, and also spent some time at San Gabriel Park along the North San Gabriel River.

San Gabriel Park

I also wanted to find a poem I had written in 1973 that led to me winning the literary festival award in poetry that year, an experience that kickstarted my thinking about the possibility of majoring in English.  It also prompted me to see writing and poetry as core features of my identity.

Unfortunately, I no longer had a copy of that poem, even though I had a photograph of me sitting with the other festival winners in poetry.  That’s Bill Cates on the left, Cary Campbell in the middle, and me on the right.

1973 Literary Festival

But I do remember thinking that the last time I saw the poem that I was a little embarrassed by its simplicity and awkward phrasing.  Still, it opened a door to the person I am today, so I wanted to find a copy for my own records.

Last week, I looked on the Southwestern library electronic catalog and had trouble finding the 1973 edition of Southwestern Magazine, the student literary and arts magazine, so I emailed the library staff for help.  A staff member there found a catalog entry and sent me an email with a link to a entry which identified a copy on microfilm

I left early from San Angelo on Monday, and after a four hour drive or so, I walked over to the library, pulled up the email on my phone, and saw at the bottom of the entry that there were also hard copies available in Special Collections.  I walked up to the top floor, filled out some paperwork, and was then handed a box of Southwestern Magazines from 1970-1980.

I hadn’t remembered that this little magazine was published three or four times a year, but there they were all neatly huddled together in this box.  Little journals in all colors and sizes.  I reached in and began pulling out one by one those that were recognizable to me, focusing on 1973, the year I won the festival prize.

I thumbed through each magazine from that year, and I found other poems I had written during that time, but I couldn’t find the poem I was looking for.  I was confused because I was sure it had been published in one of the collections that year, but I couldn’t find it.   Convinced I overlooked it, I went through all of the magazines again.  Still no luck.  I stood there, 41 years after the fact, wondering if I had only imagined the poem being published in the magazine.

The librarian in special collections came over and asked me if I found what I was looking for.

“No,” I said, “Maybe it was never published.  Or maybe it was printed in the student newspaper instead of the magazine.  I guess I don’t remember it after all.”

So I handed him the box of magazines, and both disappointed and confused, I headed over to where I would give my presentation/workshop later in the day, wondering if I just didn’t look closely enough in the box and thinking maybe I should go back later and look again a third time.

That afternoon, after making sure the audio-visual was in place for my presentation, a few members of the campus community, faculty, staff, and students, began filing into the room.  I greeted them one by one, introducing myself and learning their names.  One woman walked up to me and said,

“Hi, you must be Laurence.  I’m Joan Parks, and I work in the library.  We talked on email about that poem you were looking for.  And here is a copy I printed for you off of microfilm.”

And sure enough, there it was.   And here it is.

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I am very thankful to Joan for finding this for me.

Reading this poem of mine by the me who was 18 years old at the time helps me remember him and the kind of serious fun he liked and I like when writing our poems.

But what strikes me now as I read the poem is the fact that here was a poem about vision, about seeing and knowing and not seeing and not knowing, and there I was back in the same place four decades later talking about visual thinking.

As my pal Tex would say, “The older we get, the more we get to be the who we already were.”