Archive for June, 2009

A Graphic Syllabus

Monday, June 29th, 2009

June 29, 2009.

In an earlier post, I described various icons or images I would be using this fall to supplement students’ understanding of various reading strategies I would be teaching.

Today, I have been spending much of the day sketching out (in my particularly rudimentary fashion) a different sort of graphic vocabulary, a series of icons to illustrate my syllabus for a research and writing course.

Because the theme for this course is reading and writing about various attempts to define and remedy environmental problems, I’ve created an “earth” icon.

earth

And in my attempt to help students understand the uses of argument in this course and in college generally, I’ve drawn a picture of what argument is NOT.

shouting argument

Instead, I want my students to understand argument as research-based inquiry into the best reasons available for answering a question for which they don’t already have an answer.

In this class, they will be reading arguments on questions of environmental concern.  Here’s the illustration for that:

thinking about environment

They will then develop their own questions, investigate possible answers, and write their own arguments in response.  Here’s the corresponding image:

writing about environment

Also in the syllabus, I’ve included the standard laundry list of learning goals expected in this course, everything from writing well, to reading critically, to learning how to negotiate the library’s resources, to writing a research paper, to learning how not to plagiarize.  That’s quite a bit to learn and juggle:

juggling

In the syllabus, I’ve also described a little bit about me as a teacher. Where I have taught previously and their proximity to Angelo State:

Teaching in the USA

What I think about the relationship between teaching and learning:

reading writing thinking relationships

The importance I put on collaborative learning:

small groups

And finally, the role particular attitudes, like courage and persistence, play in learning:strength earth

After creating these icons and dropping them into the text of my syllabus, I’ve realized that I don’t yet have an appropriate format for combining the traditional syllabus with these images.  It may be better to just display them separately as I review the syllabus on the first day of class.

It may also be that I need to create a version following upon the model of McCloud’s lecture comic and create a syllabus comic-not that I would know how at this moment.  Still, it would be an interesting challenge.  I wonder if anyone else has created a syllabus in this format.

Thinking Comics

Friday, June 26th, 2009

Friday, June 26, 2009.

thinking comics

After the VizThink Chicago meeting this last Tuesday night, I ordered Scott McCloud’s Understanding Comics: The Invisible Art. And given the love affair between Amazon and UPS, I received it Thursday morning. And then I plowed right through it yesterday afternoon and evening.

I came across McCloud earlier this year through his Ted presentation:

And I had ordered a copy of Understanding Comics for my daughter Myra, but I didn’t order it for myself until Brandy and Tom at our VizThink Chicago meeting recommended it to me Tuesday. Even my new friend, Austin Kleon, thought I’d find it useful in my ventures in visual thinking, teaching, and research.

So after my first read (and there will be more), here are some initial thoughts.

  1. I like this genre of the “lecture comic” quite a bit (is this an identified genre?), and I can envision my essay “Freedom and Faith in Reading” being presented in this format quite well. (Any comic artist out there want to discuss this with me?)
  2. As a rhetorician myself–that is, as someone who studies the art of communicating with audiences through symbols (see online intro to rhetoric here), I’m especially taken by McCloud’s  ”rhetoric of comics” that includes among other things a definition and history of comics, a  vocabulary of images, the relationship between word and icon, the role of the gutter, the power of the frame, line, and color, and the six steps of the developing artist.
  3. And then there’s McCloud’s use of his own style of comic rhetoric to present and demonstrate his rhetoric of comics.
  4. When I arrive at ASU to start my new position as chair of the English Department, I’d like to investigate with members of the art department an interdisciplinary course on comics, perhaps with the title “Image and Narrative.”
  5. Also, I learned two things that directly relate to what I’ve been trying to draw here in my own blog.  First, I wondered whether calling my drawings “cartoons” was the appropriate term.  The distinction McCloud makes between cartoons (single frame drawings) and comics (sequential frame drawings) confirms in my mind anyway that I’ve been using the right term (see pages 20-21).  Second, I learned that in the rhetoric of comics a thought-bubble should be represented by a cloud and not a circle.  So that cartoon in my last post is incorrect.
  6. And a final word and image on this for now.  I don’t know yet if this is a common vocabulary in comics (but I assume it is), still I was struck by McCloud’s jacket throughout and the way the pattern (graph paper?) continues through the body and arms of the jacket uninterrupted or unchanged.

McCloud Jacket

This follows, I guess, his discussion in Chapter 2: The Vocabulary of Comics that simplified, iconic, subjective, and universal images allow readers to more easily approach and identify with the message communicated by those images–in this case, the icon of the lecturer McCloud.

A Tuesday Chicago Evening

Thursday, June 25th, 2009

Thursday, June 24, 2009.


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This last Tuesday evening, Marie-Clare and I took the Rock Island Metra via the LaSalle Street Station downtown to attend a workshop sponsored by VizThink for Chicago-area folks at the Catalyst Ranch.

Beforehand, we stopped off at Sushi Sai for some dinner–where I think I pulled a muscle in my hand trying to maneuver a chopstick.

And afterward, we still had some time to kill before the workshop, so we wandered about and discovered a gallery/exhibition space called Primitive.  Also, very cool.

Later, at the workshop, Joy Meredith welcomed us and about 10 other folks, including Brandy Agerbeck , a graphic facilitator and artist of Loosetooth.com and Tom Crawford, CEO of VizThink.  Joy gave a great presentation on “Me-Mapping,” and we drew our own “me-maps.” Here’s a photo Joy snapped and posted on Twitter.

After I described my interests in visual teaching and learning, Brandy and Tom recommended a number of resources, including Scott McCloud’s Understanding Comics, Fran Claggett’s Drawing Your Own Conclusions, and Ed Emberley’s drawing book Make a World.  I’ll be adding them to our library and talking more about them here later.


vizthink chicago

I also volunteered to host the next VizThink Chicago meeting in late July at Saint Xavier before we head on down to Texas and ASU.

Parent Days

Wednesday, June 24th, 2009

June 24, 2009.

Parent Days

Elevated – An Animated Poem

Friday, June 19th, 2009

Friday, June 19, 2009.

Here’s one of my experiments in illustrating one of my poems.

Chips and Salsa

Wednesday, June 17th, 2009

Wednesday, June 17, 2009.

chips and salsa

Mapping Kelton’s Pecos Crossing

Tuesday, June 16th, 2009

Tuesday, June 16, 2009.

Among the things I wanted to do before our move to San Angelo, Texas in August to begin my position as English Department Head at Angelo State University was to read a novel by Elmer Kelton.  Kelton is a native Texan, author of more than 50 books, and winner of a record 7 Spur Awards from Western Writers of America.

elmer-kelton

Why a novel by Elmer Kelton?  When I first saw this position open up at ASU, I noticed that the English Department sponsored an annual writers conference in honor of Elmer Kelton. 

So this last weekend, I dropped by our local bookstore and picked up a copy of Pecos Crossing

pecos-crossing-cover

Not only did I enjoy the adventures of Johnny Fristo and Speck Quitman, I got a nice geography lesson on the west central region of Texas.  Here is a map of Texas and the Edwards Plateau that I patched together after reading the novel.

Texas with Edwards Plateau

Also find below a map I’ve created through Google.  I’ve put placemarks with approximate locations of the main events of the novel.  The action starts with the southern most placemark near Del Rio and then moves north and west toward Horsehead Crossing on the Pecos.


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Student Depictions of Reading

Friday, June 12th, 2009

Friday, June 12, 2009.

In a recent post, I talked about how I developed a sketch  that I use to help my students understand reading as a relationship they create with texts.  I also use that sketch to help them understand how that relationship is dependent upon what they bring to that relationship–represented by the arrow in the sketch, including their attitudes, knowledge, background experiences, beliefs, and values.

Reading as a Process with Labels 

I concluded that post by promising to share some of my students’ drawings of what happens when they read.  In my reading and writing classes, before I share my sketch, I ask my students to draw a picture of what happens when they read.   In other words, I want them to put in a visual format their conception of reading.  I provide them with a piece of paper and give them a number of prompts to prepare them for their drawings.  I also ask them to write on the reverse of the page a short paragraph explaining how their drawing represents what happens when they read.  As for the prompts, I ask them to think about where and when they like to read, about their histories of reading in and outside of school, about their favorite authors and books, and I ask them to try to picture in their minds what happens when they read.  In other words, I am asking them to account for one of the most powerful influences upon their relationships with texts:  a personal vision of what happens when they read.  Here below are several of these drawings that I collected in fall of 2003 from first-year college students at Saint Xavier University in Chicago.

diving

hands

brain

text shooter

question

picturing

sleeping

butterfly

path

destination

read and then write

Initially, I had no idea what kind of drawings students would produce.  But I did start with some hunches.  I assumed that the drawings would reveal a limited vocabulary of images.  I also assumed that the drawings would be useful to students and teachers; that is, they could be used to get a sense of what students thought about reading, and this knowledge would be helpful to teachers when designing instruction.  These assumptions have turned out to be correct.  After collecting drawings from middle school, high school, and first-year college students over the last several years, I have discovered that there is a common vocabulary of images and a common vocabulary of overall depictions of reading.  I have also discovered that these drawings can be used to help students reflect upon and change their reading habits.  (I’ll talk more about these common vocabularies and methods for student reflection later.)

However, I didn’t foresee that these drawings would lead me into an entirely new area of research–the study of reading metaphors.   In short, I soon discovered that there is a limited set of cognitive metaphors that can be applied to students’ drawings of what happens when they read, and that these metaphors are all grounded in the core metaphor “movement.”  (I’ll talk more about these metaphors later.)

Bluebirds

Wednesday, June 10th, 2009

Wednesday, June 10, 2009.

bluebirds

Picturing Reading as a Process

Friday, June 5th, 2009

Friday, June 5, 2009.

Over the past fifteen years, I have taught primarily introductory courses in writing and in literature, and I commonly encounter students who dislike reading.  However, I am most frustrated when they blame texts for their own difficulties.  They say that a reading assignment is boring or hard to understand.  They indicate that the novel, story, poem, or play is acting in a way they don’t like.  Some talk about texts as if they were human, and then blame them for acting badly.  In other words, these students are reading passively, asking that the text perform for them, rather than seeing themselves as the actual performers in the drama we call reading.

rosenblatt-cover 

In response to these frequent encounters, and on the advice of a colleague and long-time mentor–Tom Rivers, I reached out to Louise Rosenblatt’s Literature as Exploration.  In this book, a classic in the field of reader-response criticism and pedagogy, Rosenblatt argues for the democratic values of teaching literature because the English classroom is particularly well-suited to develop the self-awareness, critical thinking, and imaginative abilities necessary in a free society.  

I also thought that her transactional theory of reading would be useful to my students, especially because it acknowledges the relationship a reader builds with a literary text and how that relationship produces the experience of the text.  But more importantly, I found value in Rosenblatt’s theory because it helped me talk to my students about their own contributions to and responsibilities toward that relationship, such as their experiences, emotions, knowledge, and attitudes.  

 

I then decided that Rosenblatt’s ideas would be even more useful to my students if I could represent them visually.  So I began to sketch out a process to show students what commonly happens when we read.  

Reading as a Process

I drew an arrow to represent all of the things the reader brings to reading, a triangle to represent the rhetorical world of the text (its author, form, topic, and audience), a speech bubble to represent possible responses, and a box around these three figures to represent the opportunity for the reader to review the process by which and the relationship through which the response was created.

With this drawing, I meant to highlight how the reader is ultimately responsible for building a relationship with a text and how every response points back to what the reader brings to that relationship.  Reading as a Process with Labels

This way of depicting reading as a process has been particularly helpful to me when I explain to my students how and why readers respond differently to the same text.  In fact, I spend a good amount of time teaching students about the subjective nature of reading and how readers’ responses reflect what they bring to reading as much as what the text has to offer them.  (A fuller discussion of this depiction of reading as a process is here.)

After creating my picture of reading as a process, I also became interested in how students might depict their own versions of what happens when they read.  So before showing them my picture, I have made it a regular practice on the first or second day of classes to ask my students to draw one of their own. 

In an upcoming post, I’ll share some of my students’ drawings.