Archive for May, 2009

Reading Visually: Part 1

Friday, May 29th, 2009

Friday, May 29, 2009.

This here is part 1 of a post on reading visually.  I’ll post the second part on Monday, June 1, 2009.

I regularly assign daily reading assignments in my literature and writing courses that require students to read a short text (an essay, article, book chapter, short story, or poem) and then compose a brief one-page typed response.  They bring these to class, share them in small groups, and then we go at it.  And by “go at it,” I mean we talk about the text and our responses and why we are responding in the ways that we do.

I provide students with guidelines for their responses; for example, I sometimes ask for a three-paragraph response in which they summarize the reading, explain what they take to be the most compelling idea, and then ask a question about what they’ve read.  

Over the last several years, I’ve also offered students the option of responding visually.  Here below from a literature course I taught this last spring semester is one student’s visual response to an episode in Carlos Ruiz Zafon’s The Shadow of the Wind

Student Visual on Shadow of the Wind

Pretty good, huh?  I like providing students with this creative option, and I’ve received a wide range of excellent illustrations from students. 

Lately, however, I’ve begun to think about how I might include more visual presentations in my teaching, as well as offer my students additional creative ways of responding to texts. After reading Dan Roam’s The Back of the Napkin, I believe I’ve discovered some of these interesting “additional ways.”

backofthenapkin

I came across Dan Roam and his book after noodling about on the Internet, taking a look at some TED conference videos, and then coming across a 40 minute video presentation by Dan on visual thinking called “The Way of the Whiteboard: Persuading with Pictures” that he delivered at the MIX 09 conference.

I immediately ordered his book, and even though it is directed at an audience of business folk looking for more effective ways to analyze problems and discover solutions, I was intrigued by his take on visual cognition and the power of images to communicate and persuade.

I was particularly struck by his chapter “The Six Ways of Seeing” and his illustration of “The 6X6″ Rule” that captures not only 6 ways of seeing, but the corresponding 6 ways of showing.

6 by 6 rule dan roam

About this same time in my literature course, I was reviewing some response strategies with my students in preparation for a literary analysis essay they would be writing. 

Aside: In a later post, I will explain how I have used visuals in my teaching [1] to help students reflect on their learning and [2] to explain reading as a process.  Meanwhile, here’s an article on the latter from 2005.

In this essay assignment, they were to use 5 response strategies: personal, formal, topical, interpretive, and ethical.  While I had presented these strategies (and others) earlier in the term, I had just listed them on the board as I introduced them in a brief lecture.  I had also provided students with a handout of these strategies. 

But after reading Roam’s book, I decided to create a list of reading strategies that included images or icons to represent the strategies.  In helping my students prepare for writing their analysis essays, I drew this codex on the board and reviewed each strategy one by one.   Here below is a version of that codex.

Reading Response Codex

This “Reading Response Codex” includes the 9 strategies of response I generally teach in my introductory literature courses, and these icons as a graphic vocabulary provide what I think are effective visual support for teaching and for learning these strategies.

In part 2, I will describe 14 formats I’ve developed for visual reading responses with some examples from a text I’ll be teaching this fall.

 

Shared Decision-Making in Higher Ed

Wednesday, May 27th, 2009

Wednesday, May 27, 2009.

I’ve posted a new drawing in Cartoon Wednesday titled “Shared Decision-Making in Higher Ed.”

shared decision-making in higher ed
 
Also, I just learned that my chapbook of poetry How Sharp is now listed on www.amazon.com.   It is also available through Lulu.  

How Sharp Cover

Here is one of the illustrations from that collection by my daughter Myra.

howsharppage

Picturing Sentences

Sunday, May 24th, 2009

Sunday, May 24, 2009.

Several years ago at SXU, I taught a course called “Modern English Grammar” for students who were planning to teach English in middle and high school.  Rather than focus exclusively on “descriptive” grammar and the tradition of parsing and diagramming sentences, I wanted to help prospective teachers learn a “generative” or productive grammar that would foster their students’  facility with and confidence in writing.

After some success with this course, I decided on 4 new strategies to include in my college writing classes for first-year students:

  1. a simplified vocabulary of sentences, including most prominently “phrase,” “clause,” and “sentence,”
  2. visual support for learning a limited number of sentence strategies,
  3. a series of sentence strategy mini-lessons spread over the course of the term, and
  4. brief assignments that call for students to incorporate specific sentence strategies in their writing.

Here below is one of the first images I used in my classes.

 writer's palette sentences

This image of a writer’s palette containing 7 basic sentence strategies was inspired by a powerful analogy contained in Harry Noden’s Image Grammar, a text I used in the grammar course.  Noden compares writing to painting; that is, the choices we make when we write are similar to the choices painters make when they call upon a particular color or use a particular brush stroke. 

Lately, I’ve become dissatisfied with the representation of sentences in my writer’s palette image, especially its failure to show the ingredients of sentences and how they are combined to create basic sentence types.  So I decided to try to map out some alternatives.  First, I sketched out a networked mind map:

grammar web

But this web of grammar relationships fails to represent the generative process of creating sentences out of smaller grammatical units.  

So then I tried a series of concentric circles or sectioned rings to show how sentences are generated out of punctuation, conjunctions, phrases, and clauses:

First Go at Basic Vocabulary of Sentences 5-22-09

As I was struggling with the concentric rings in this sketch and their relationships, I realized that I was also searching for the “right” metaphor that would capture the generative concept.  At the bottom of the same image above is my next attempt, a sort of “building block”  model of grammar that begins with the most basic of marks that we use to make letters, numerals, and punctuation. 

Here’s another sketched attempt at the concentric ring concept, now closer to a traditional pie chart or a color wheel:

grammar wheel 

And here’s another sketch of the building block image, now more appropriately termed a “grammar strata.”

grammar strata
These models are not meant to include all aspects of sentence grammar; for example, I haven’t accounted for word types (nouns, verbs, articles, etc.)  because I assume first-year college students bring with them some knowledge about sentences already.  (And I see that in the “grammar strata” model, I dropped out conjunctions.) 

In the end, the two latter models are combination models, both descriptive and process-oriented, and both contain the ”outer” or “upper” levels of sentence strategies I want my writing students to practive and produce.

Moving forward, I have 3 questions about this sort of modeling. 

  1. Are these attempts at finding an image or metaphor for sentence grammar moving me away from my desire for a “simplified” or “basic” vocabulary of sentences? 
  2. Do I have to select one model over the others, or might they all serve to help students gain confidence and facility in sentence (and idea) generation? 
  3. How have other teachers attempted to picture or analogize sentence grammar for their students?

Thinking in Multiple-Variable Plots

Thursday, May 21st, 2009

Thursday, May 21, 2009.

Yesterday, I posted my first Cartoon Wednesday on this site with my drawing “Holiday Hyperglycemia.”  

This way of representing ideas was inspired by www.thisisindexed.com, a blog by Jessica Hagy.   Jessica describes her blog as “a little project that allows me to make fun of some things and sense of others without resorting to doing actual math.”   She draws multivariable plots, bar charts, and Venn diagrams on index cards and posts them on her blog.  Most are great fun.  Like this one:

hagycard2128

 

 

 

 

 

 

Jessica’s way of representing her ideas also got me thinking about the kind of experiences I’ve had as an academic leader, especially in my role as director of general education at Saint Xavier University in Chicago and in my future role as English Department chair at Angelo State University in San Angelo, Texas.  

Here’s the result of some of that thinking,  a cartoon of mine that I published recently in Inside Higher Ed, an online daily for those interested in higher education:

haste and collegiality

Let me know what you think.

Cartoon Wednesday and About

Wednesday, May 20th, 2009

Wednesday, May 20, 2009.

Two updates today.

First, I’ve added a new feature called “Cartoon Wednesday” that will include a new cartoon each Wednesday.  Some of these will be mine, some from other cartoonists.  The first of these is “Holiday Hyperglycemia.”  It plots the relationship between sugar cookies and booze during the holidays.

holiday hyperglycemia

 

Second, I’ve updated my “About” page with a biography map:

about me
 

(Clicking on the images above will take you to my flickr photostream.)

 Let me know what you think in the comments.

Introducing The Illustrated Professor

Sunday, May 17th, 2009

Sunday, May 17, 2009.

I decided to begin this blog after attending earlier this week a webinar at www.vizthink.com titled “Visual Note-Taking 101.”   

This three hour webinar reminded me how much I have valued visual thinking in my research and in my teaching. 

I was particularly interested in one of the presenters, Austin Kleon, and he sparked an interest in developing a graphic vocabulary that I can use in my teaching–I’ll talk more about this later.  

His presentation titled “The Battle Between Pictures and Words”  was also very interesting.

View more presentations from Austin Kleon.

Given this webinar experience, I have decided to incorporate more visual ingredients into my academic life, something already evident in my new website: www.laurencemusgrove.com.